FIRE and FLAMES
Flames are dancing
red, orange, white and blue
they are dancing
licking the air
they are dancing
with out any people there
in a circle moving ever in a side ways trance
that is there dance
the flames are getting higher
for they are the element of...
FIRE
posted by Matara @ 11:47 AM
2 Comments:
At 12:55 PM,
Kendal said…
Quite vivid, Matara. I could certainly see the flames and the dancers and feel the energy. You're VERY talented. Keep it up! Reading your poetry breaks up the monotony of my day and adds a bit of color to my beige days in the office.
At 5:15 PM,
sara said…
My Darling Daughter,
I so love, love, love your poetry! Your images are so crisp and bright.
You are so good at feeling an idea and painting it with words so we can all step into your thoughts and appreciate the sweetness of your world.
Thank you for sharing your vision!
Only love,
Mom
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